Pretty Mouth and Green My Eyes

The story opens with a phone ringing in Lee's apartment somewhere in New York. Sitting beside Lee is a young, blue-eyed woman. The two of them had been sitting and smoking together when Arthur calls, a colleague of his, drunkenly concerned with where his wife is. Arthur later refers to his wife by her name, Joanie. All of whom had just attended a party just hours previously before the phone call occurs. Arthur goes through a scatter of out-loud thought and questions addressed to Lee, accompanied with a roller-coaster of emotions. Arthur's main concern is the whereabouts of his wife, even though he appears to regret his marriage to her. He later expresses a concern with his job at the law firm. Lee attempts at talking some sense into Arthur throughout the conversation, while Arthur continuously interrupts him. All the while Lee is on the phone, the girl he's accompanied by is smoking and exchanging looks with him. Lee tries to reassure Arthur that his wife will probably arrive at any minute and that he should try to pull himself together before she walks in. Although neither the narrator nor the three characters explicitly confirm this, the girl Lee is with is implied to be Arthur's wife, Joanie. This connection isn't drawn until Arthur refers to Joanie's eyes as seashells. The phone call eventually tails off with Lee convincing Arthur to get some rest. The young woman and Lee exchange a few words and continue to smoke when they're interrupted again by another phone call. It's Arthur again, letting Lee know that Joanie just walked in and that everything's alright. Arthur talks a little while longer explaining how he'd like to move to Connecticut with Joanie and practically contradicts everything he had just said in the previous phone call. Lee interrupts Arthur and explains that he has to go due to a headache with unexplained origins. Lee hangs up and the conversation ends abruptly, and in this way so does the story.[1]

An overarching theme that is frequently discussed is infidelity. Although not completely explicit, the reader is left to infer that Joanie is the young girl with Lee as well as Arthur's spouse that's being searched for. This theme is even stretched to Salinger's own personal life, English Professor Dr. Brett Weaver argues, "Joanie is based on Salinger's one-time girlfriend Oona O'Neill who threw him over for Charlie Chaplin, and that 'Pretty' is Salinger's revenge for his broken heart."[2]

There has been practically no critical reception for "Pretty Mouth and Green My Eyes." Author John V. Hagopian acknowledges that the most commentary that's been made is "three paragraphs by David L. Stevenson, [comparing] the story...with Hemingway's 'The Short, Happy Life of Francis Macomber.'"[3] Hagopian professes "Pretty Mouth" as "lucid, controlled, and beautifully-formed."[3]

The story receives most mention through inclusions in anthologies of Salinger's work, or other similar anthologies like Famous American Stories by Angus Burrell. However, all that's noted of the story in Burrell's anthology is a short synopsis.[4]

Other few acknowledgements are only interpretive. Author James Lundquist states "Pretty Mouth" is, "a story that disintegrates into pathos and, uncharacteristically, is without any healing sympathy."[5] French author and artist Camille Bourniquel explains the story to be "an urbanized tale of the managerial set [consisting] of two telephone conversations."[6]